Magician mother and the Son!!!
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That stick is a HUGE distraction
George John Bowden:
A very strong beginning especially on the female character, however I feel it declines as it goes on. The female's position and relation to the camera is really good in the first 100 frames.
Overall, I don't understand why the characters are so far to the left?
Nice render, but animation needs work. Feels too pose-to-pose. I'm not sure what this interaction even is? Her movements don't always feel well-motivated (ie what is the purpose of this motion she is making)
unclear what's supposed to be happening here. don't overcomplicate it. decent animation
Why so much negative space?
Nice animation but take care with the framing and the story. That empty space at the right side distracts a lot and I don't see any justification. And I don't undesrstood the final movement of her.
Description: A magician mothers conversation with her son
Experience: Not much
Time taken: 2weeks