Comments:
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Howard Cameron:
That stick is a HUGE distraction
George John Bowden:
A very strong beginning especially on the female character, however I feel it declines as it goes on. The female's position and relation to the camera is really good in the first 100 frames.
Overall, I don't understand why the characters are so far to the left?
Sarah Johnson:
Nice render, but animation needs work. Feels too pose-to-pose. I'm not sure what this interaction even is? Her movements don't always feel well-motivated (ie what is the purpose of this motion she is making)
Brian Duffy:
unclear what's supposed to be happening here. don't overcomplicate it. decent animation
Christopher Scott:
Why so much negative space?
Fabian:
Nice animation but take care with the framing and the story. That empty space at the right side distracts a lot and I don't see any justification. And I don't undesrstood the final movement of her.
Animator: Amrithraj
Description: A magician mothers conversation with her son
Experience: Not much
Time taken: 2weeks