Comments:
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Ben Hall:
The animation must be smoother and more in sync with the dialogue also we can't tell the man is looking at the woman
Brian Duffy:
be sure to act the dialogue out yourself so you understand which poses make sense
Christopher Scott:
The hands on the woman are like paddles, spacing is very jerky and the arms are twinning.
Animator: Arkun
Description: Gordon's mother encourages Gordon because his girlfriend left him
Experience: 2 year
Time taken: 10 days