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Gordon begins to rise

by Arkun

Final Rating: 3.31. Finished 59 out of 83 entries.

348 views including the voting period.


Animator: Arkun

Description: Gordon's mother encourages Gordon because his girlfriend left him

Experience: 2 year

Time taken: 10 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Ben Hall:

The animation must be smoother and more in sync with the dialogue also we can't tell the man is looking at the woman

Brian Duffy:

be sure to act the dialogue out yourself so you understand which poses make sense

Christopher Scott:

The hands on the woman are like paddles, spacing is very jerky and the arms are twinning.