Baley Jauma-Hall:

UGH. this is really not finished at all

mowanie:

Liked the concept and the designs.

Brian Duffy:

this is interesting design-wise, especially considering a few nice poses you've managed to get out of such abstracted characters. forget the background and the "effects lines". keep in mind that you need to learn the rules before you can break them in an interesting way. you can have really wild character designs and super loose drawings, but if they don't flow together, it's not going to be compelling animation

Brian W.:

That's a lot of drawings, and as rough as it still is, I think you managed to assert a lot of personality. Please keep at it.