Comments:
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Elisabeth Janerka:
Quite floaty characters. Tweaking of the timing and more breakdowns and inbetweens would help a lot.
Edward Davies:
I really like how she's a little tipsy
Raggy:
Yikes. It's extremely over acted...it takes away from the dialogue and the clarity of the scene.
Leonardo Pereira:
You need to work more in your poses, feels mechanics and robotics. But you have nice acting ideas.
Mason Jones:
I like the head and core animation for the male actor. I feel like the beat of the animation could have been more varied. Everything seemed to float around not a lot of poses were held where it felt like they could be such as frames 180 to 220 the male actor could have held his pose more before pulling the female away. Also, the arms could use some work.
Animator: Catherine Lachepelle
Description: First time participating in the contest! I used Ray, courtesy of CGTarian Online School and Jasmine Rose rig. Both rigs are really fun to use.
Experience: University student in 2nd year
Time taken: About 40 hours