Pallav Sharma:

move the lower body also

Jamie F:

Be prepared to move more that just the head, even if they're sitting down. non-moving parts become very noticeable very quickly.

Raggy:

The pose on mery is very unflattering. It could be saved if you picked a more interesting angle for the camera instead of dead on. There are also some snappy areas, perhaps your keys are too close together?

Arlo Karleskint:

Loving the body language

Mason Jones:

Clunky head lifts from the blonde. Also, more body movements would add more life.

Henry Barbee:

Poses were pretty good, but transitions were pretty linear. Need more slow in/ out of poses.