Marisa Gershenhorn:

Acting could be more expressive.

Leonardo Pereira:

check the sizes of your characters

Paraskevi Koutalou:

nice expressive, especially the left character's eyes! It seems to me though that the character on the right good use even a slight movement from waist down

Henry Barbee:

Really excellent! I would say maybe put a little more movement in the body of the girl in red at the beginning, but thats all i can think of. Well done!