Comments:
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Animatical:
What?
Alex Ang:
Weight and timing. Last frame of the first shot, forward movement stops when it should continue.
Yonghwan Seok:
It would 've been better if the monster was much bigger and evil looking
Adrian Petitjean:
Weight problems . Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals
Z S:
Good attempt, but the camerawork and the overall animation is lacking a certain flow and smoothness to it. Nice work though.
Ryan Woods:
4 for lighting,
8 for models,
7 for camera/pacing,
12 for charm.
sadly we are only judging animation... keep up the good work!
a little stretching or smearing the jumps would add a LOOOT!
Victor Lemée:
lack some weight, Take some reference and watch your arcs
Animator: kat.bramston@bigpond.com
Description: A warrior elf has been tasked to rid the forest from the ministrations of a public menace ... but not all is what it seems.
Experience: Just graduated - AIE class 2019
Time taken: About 4-5 days