Alex Ang:

draw pupils, eye believe in you.

Adrian Petitjean:

He goes back quite suddenly. I would have liked to see him jump, especially when the music starts to go up in tone. The expression change of the face is nice, but the first pose does staty for quite a while. Nothing happens for a few solid seconds.

Joshua Kaberline:

Simple, but good

Ryan Woods:

great close up. man scuffles aways from ledge a bit too quick for me, also he should lean into a motion first if hes going to move quickly. right now hes leaning away by looking over the edge as he backs up.

Victor Lemée:

go back too quickly, character fix in the end, could've be cool to see him jump :)

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Would have been nice to see him jump, but overall very good.