Andrew Lawson:

Not sure why non original characters were allowed in. Decent camera turnaround, but very stiff movements.

Joshua Kaberline:

Nice drawings, a little shaky for my liking, but to each their own.

Adrian Petitjean:

Try posing the characters better to give them more appealing and dynamic poses. Check Lastman for good action poses.

Ryan Woods:

great camera work when rotating around gokus head for a punch. would like to see more in between poses during combat. the close up fight reads very well, but some parts more like sliding drawings than acting characters. for instance if gokus goes for a roundhouse kick, id like to see him "anticipate"by rotating his chest first then hips, then the kick. also some effects get in the way of being able to read the poses, there is a time for this, but there is a bit too much as is. The bones of a great animation are there, keep up the good work!

Victor Lemée:

Lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs, look for One Punch Man or My hero Academia for fight reference in 2D

Donald Marks:

Please don't trace Drabonball frames and submit it as your own animation.