Comments:
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Adrian Petitjean:
Did not really understand the story. The scale of the characters did not make much sense to me. I did not understand if the machine was huge or not. The biggest issue is the timing of the animation.
Ryan Woods:
scenery generation was well done, love the day night sequence, good pacing, however the movements all seem rigid
Victor Lemée:
Story is a bit confusing for me, lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
Fun idea but very rough animation.
Tisa Rahman:
Some good squash and stretch, walk cycle needs a little work and some more background panning during the walk would make it look better :)
Animator: Andrew Lawson
Description: A very important mission
Experience: 2 Years.
Time taken: 3 Weeks working in spare time.