Comments:
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Melissa:
I dont understand what is the challenge here..
Alex Ang:
Very confusing, in these types of shots we usually see the character hunched down but that would also give it away.
Adrian Petitjean:
Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals
Ryan Woods:
expression during frame 90-130. i dont know what emotion he is feeling here and i think this strongly impacts the whole animation. also the nose is too active to ignore and too subtle to be sniffing. There are other ways to animate inhale/exhale. I would suggest leaving it still as the nose doesnt help us express. (maybe wrinkling the nose for disgust but thats more in the bridge of the nose/eyes) lastly he stands and raises the bottle WAY to fast. fun idea and composition sells the joke well. also good timing on blinks.
Victor Lemée:
Take some reference for the head look and watch your arcs
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
Idea is nice and animation is ok, but could use some improvement.
Animator: Jack Doremus
Description: A man must make a vitally important decision at midnight.
Experience: Beginner/Student
Time taken: 1.5-2 weeks