Alex Ang:

You need to take some time on selling the weight of the body.

Adrian Petitjean:

Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals. But the idea is nice. If you keep working, you will get there.

Joshua Kaberline:

I love his walk!

Ryan Woods:

ha very fun, needs more easing and refining key poses a bit to improve silhouette. pose at 246, would suggest holding pose longer for comedic crash, or shorting to be an in between before laying flat, right now its in a weird spot of, "did he break the rig for a couple frames there?"

Victor Lemée:

lack some weight, Take some reference and watch your arcs

mickey:

4th

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

The walking feels weird.