Comments:
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Animatical:
Needs a lot of improvement, but not bad for a beginner!
Yonghwan Seok:
That Gun needs to have constraint.
Adrian Petitjean:
Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals
Victor Lemée:
lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs
Tisa Rahman:
Like the Western feel. I feel like the shot with both characters could’ve been framed better with the rule of thirds since it looked like that’s what one character was doing (while the main character was centred)
Animator: Gabe Grende
Description: Is it Sci-Fi, is it Western, I honestly have no idea.
Experience: New to 3D animation
Time taken: A week and a half