CW:

The final two lines are the wrong way around, so it doesn’t make sense IMO.

Nolan:

Pretty sure you got the lines mixed up there at the end. the girl in black is confirming the girl in white's question in the voice clip. This makes the acting seem really weird.

Clara Beacco:

Work a bit more on your timing, all the movements and actions look very even. Cool face expressions.

Joshua:

This was pretty good.

However the last part of the audio I think you got mixed up. Not that I blame you I was confused about it for a couple of days myself.

For the characters their interaction was good you definitely have a good idea on the poses to make, however the motions felt very up tight and way to straight forward.

For example the back character when she swings her arms at around 214 has no arc motion which would make it feel less robotic.

And there's no notable holds or ease in or outs in this. Most of the motions are almost evenly paced from point A of the motion to point B of the motion.

Keren Shalev:

Nice job! I like your poses, especially the lady on the back has really nice acting choices. Lipsync looks really good! I would mind that on F203 the lady in white has both of her hands reach the pose at the exact time which makes the movement a little bit stiff there. Overall great shot!