Nolan:

The jump comes off as if she's on fast forward. the lip sync also feels pretty off. The other movements while fast for my taste, do sell an eager character.

Clara Beacco:

Nice movements and poses! Try to add a bit of movement when the girl gets off the table and at the end when they both stop so it doesn't look completely static. Just a little, like you did with the hair, that looks very nice.

Caleb Rankin:

Great concept and fun performance. I would definitely add some movement to the holding poses to make it look a little more life like.

Darren Evander:

lypsinc could be fixed

JP:

Wonky performance