Isaiah Hoeninghaus:

I like the scenario you set up, with some editing I think it would be really great. There's a few too many smears, and the main dialogue piece could use a few less key frames. Also, in the final shot it would be cool if the character on the right put his hands up or something to try and calm down the other character.

Shaun Bartoo:

Great style. Love the snappiness.

Tushar Kohli:

Winner!!