Isaiah Hoeninghaus:

With the second shot, the character in the four ground is sitting right on the edge of the frame creating a tangent. If zoomed in for more of an over the shoulder or medium shot that issue would be fixed.

Visual Animation:

Perfect

Tom Islava:

This is awesome, man. My only critique i could give you is on fr. 38-198, the movement on the girl of the right could use some refinement, some loosening up. Other than that, 8 stars from me.

Natalie:

Acting is believable for both characters. Remember the 180 degree rule about camera angles. First the blonde was on the left then to the right. Facial expression on the dark hair when blonde was talking at the beginning, that's good when it comes to 2 characters talking in a scene

Shaun Bartoo:

Pretty good acting! For more polish in this one, watch your unfocused eyelines and popping in the IK knees.

David Fliesen:

Character movements are overly forced. They don't feel believable as the ones saying the lines of this clip.