Shaun Bartoo:

Pretty good acting. My main advice would be to watch your arcs. Theres a lot of popping happening here. You could get a lot of polish just by individually working up from COG to chest, head, elbows, hands and polishing each arc for smoother timing and spacing

David Fliesen:

While we only see one person in your animation, the movements to convey a second person on the phone are a bit over done. It just doesn't feel like it's portraying the audio. And she seems more like a Broadway actress practicing her lines than someone talking into a phone. The clip should feel believable.