Final Rating: 4.18. Finished 44 out of 61 entries.

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Animator: Marisol Pérez

Description: Two friends are surrounded by the police outside their house, one of them is trying to convince the other to do the right thing.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks


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Isaiah Hoeninghaus:

If you put the camera back on the character with the suspenders' face for the final piece of dialogue that would be beneficial.

David Fliesen:

Camera work needs a bit of work. Don't cut to a new camera for no reason and you should read up on shot sequences to gain a better understanding from film on how to frame up your shots and take between shots. Also the lips do not match up very well with the audio clip.