Comments:
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Shaun Bartoo:
This is interesting but I don't know if your cut in the middle to a fantasy sequence is totally working. Great style though! I'd focus on tightening up your lip sync in future months
Richard Adams:
Animation isn't great, but I love that unique rendering style you used. The scenario you chose works well, too.
Predrag Lazic:
A for originality.
Wash:
Love the flash-forward as a stylistic choice. It's crazy but it matches the emotional level of the dialogue and doesn't distract from the intention.
David Fliesen:
Way too many shots for this short of an animation. You should limit your cameras so we can focus on the animation.
Animator: Zoé Ortega
Description: An awkward situation in a supermarket, with two characters not really on the ball.
Experience: 1 year as a student
Time taken: 1 month