Alp Yamanel:

Too many poses, no time to see what his reaction or behaviour is

Ben Zingo:

sometimes less is more!
Give the audience a chance to take in individual actions, and don't forget: anticipation, action, overshoot, settle....

props for doing so much, but it's too much to really process everything going on!

Deep Debnath:

Need more moving hold. This is too much movement of each and every frames...

GLEB:

Too much movement. My head is spinning. But it is amplitude)