Ankit mukopadhyay:

nice rendering and camera movements, animation looks a bit robotic though.

Clayton Orgles:

There are some some good ideas here, but you need to work on the execution.

Make sure you record a reference video acting out the scene so you have a guide for timing and anatomy.

Outside of the animation, I like your concept, composition, and lighting. Lots of positives there! Keep practising!

Predrag Lazic:

Cool mood!