LiLiLiLi:

Too many body bouncing, drag and buffer with same time，makes the guy more like a robot, also the girl doesn't need so many bouncing she can have slow, clam and smooth action for comparison.
Reduce the deformation of lipsync, weight center need movements. Make the emotion asymmetry.

Joshua:

Mouth movements need a lot of work.

Clayton Orgles:

Good work! I like the concept and the animation is very smooth and realistic.

The core thing throwing me off are his mouth movements. I know it's supposed to be a comedic breakup scene and you're constrained by the audio, but the audio mismatch makes it look off.

Otherwise, really love this! You've done a fantastic job. So many subtle body movements!