LiLiLiLi:

The performance is kinda even, maybe need a few exaggerate poses to notice "this is the highlight of the story"， you can add more emotion change and more performance.
Chars poses are way too straight, try give some more angle to body parts, more curves can be made.
Need better prepare and buffer and don't make chars start or stop suddenly.
Chars five senses looks not match very well, eyebrow，lids and eyes could use a little more cooperation.