Jocelyn Gray:

Interesting idea, and I like the snappiness of the transitions, but you gotta have greater contrast with his "in character" moments, which are too snappy as well-they should be smooth and realistic by contrast, I feel

Gabriel:

great concept, but timing looks off for me. the jittering is too slow i guess. and overall you should use more overlap...

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!