Roger Crown:

I love the staging of both these shots,,,but therein lies the problem...this is too big a staging for the gag.. and this is a lazy man's way out for not doing proper lip sync....Sorry, but that's why I only gave you 5 stars for this one...but sure would love to see more from you in future competitions !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ not that I am or ever will be good at such....]

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!