Comments:
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Gabriel:
her eyes are looking in the wrong direction...
but rhe body-work is pretty good.
Patrick Høiseth:
Switch the characters around, maybe. Other then that, it's pretty good, but I don't feel right about the keyframing since it feels off about the way they are moving.
Thabiso Motsoeneng:
Great idea, work more on your lip sync.
Jez:
a living brain... what a life to have
Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Danny Kneip:
The direction of their heads is really strange and distracting. The lip sync is okay.
Animator: Kirisu
Description: A mad scientist has removed Scout's brain in order to give him the ultimate Goat Simulator experience.
Experience: BFA CG Animation
Time taken: 5 days