Roger Crown:

Redid my vote for this, from 10 stars, down to 8.....

The 1 character now looks as if he were rotoscoped from 3d design....

so the second char.... looks to me fully drawn and it looks like you were having fun with him....good for you...and I really want to see more from you from now on...please.

Amartya Mukherji:

wow.. very well done. But your camera is jerky. the final zoom-in could have been much smoother

Pauline Champetier:

I saw your first version, and even if the story was quite unclear it worked better than putting a woman picture at the end. It doesn't feel related at all to the first shots.

Malissa Burch:

Love the movements of the characters! They feel like they are 3D models because you captured the masses perfectly.