Jocelyn Gray:

When you're just doing facial animation only, you gotta push those expressions! Great start!

曾健瑜:

excellent！

Casey Colledge:

The last over the shoulder shot could be moved over to the right. Right now, you are only using half of the screen and it feels like there is going to be something happening in that blank section to the right but nothing ever does.

Pauline Champetier:

She doesn't have to wait so long to start talking, she can start when she makes him turn back.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!