Comments:
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Danny Kneip:
So over the top it's humorous! The lip sync needs much more attention - the first line isn't readable and the man's gesture is inexplicable. At F166, the arm "pops" in a very strange way and freezes. It's a good attempt, overall, but needs much, much more polishing and fluid movement to be believable.
Amartya Mukherji:
animation floats.
Will Sherburne:
Some of the poses are nice but it needs more work in the inbetweening stages. It just sort of evenly transitions from one pose to the next and you definitely need to add slow ins and outs and work on the timing of the piece.
Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Animator: Bruno Farias
Description: A man asks for a mage to save their sick son. However the mage take the boy's soul and transform him into a controlled zombie.
Experience: About 1 year
Time taken: It took me about a week