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good try... keep it up
i see the subtle shake given to the oldman #awesome
Probably the first 76 frames are unnecessary. The old man's walk cycle is decent, as is his rising from the chair, though I'm not sure why he needs to take two good, hard looks inside the cage to make sure it's empty. The other man's sync is good, but I think he holds his head away from the window too long after the first line. The camera tracking back on the final shot is a great touch.
Ingenious scenario, good animation
I really appreciate the originality of this piece! Especially after all the Frankenstein entries this month!
nice fan. very good story.
Ryan D Lowe:
The lip sync here is the biggest opportunity, try to utilize bigger/unique shapes. I would watch the limp though, it reads more as a pop right now.
Description: Young Guy gives freedom to his pet bird though he luvs him a lot.He has a mixed feeling of sadness of loosing his pet & also feeling proud of giving his bird a freedom.Old guy thinks he killed him when he finds the bird missing
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