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Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Sarah Johnson:
Animation is floaty and has no sense of weight. No need to pick the third character up at the end. That is a very hard move to pull off properly, and your time would be better spent refining the acting, facial expressions, and body mechanics.
Animator: Pam Hampton
Description: One man discovers body, but his master he has transformed the victim.
Experience: Off and on for a long enough to be better.
Time taken: less than a week