Danny Kneip:

Could have done without the ending credit. Your lip sync needs much more attention, as does your composition. The finger wag is nicely done.

Roger Crown:

uh...ohhh...we should have a disquallification for this one...the end has an email addy to it.....

Mike W:

umm

Jesse J. Jones:

It is against the rules to place your name on your entry, for fairness to all entrants.

Jose:

Not supposed to put your name and contact details in

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!