Jocelyn Gray:

Great story, the animation doesn't feel like it has enough weight to it, work on timing there

Pauline Champetier:

Hard to concentrate on the animation with the old movie effect which doesn't feel like one and disturbs from the video..

Ryan D Lowe:

The overlapping layer you decided to use here for the render really ruins this piece for me. I can't make out a lot of whats happening, and overall it looks pretty solid. It feels like you're trying to hide things behind your 'old film reel' render layer.