Roger Crown:

Super nice try !!!

I changed my vote from 4 stars to 6...

You have the acting down... now only if you would complete the gag that so needed to be here.....

Carlo Nicoletta:

Good job. You can feel him thinking. It would be nice to get a quick background in there just to improve the storytelling.

Amartya Mukherji:

timing is very nice.. good poses required

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Danny Kneip:

Fluid animation