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Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Sarah Johnson:
Work on making the motions feel like they have some weight to them. The whole thing feels floaty. Not bad on the posing!
Danny Kneip:
Maybe a bit too melodramatic? The character movements are obvious and slow moving and the sync needs a bit more polishing.
Animator: Celeste Ferre
Description: A mad scientist accidentally killed a woman's gold fish during one of his experiments.
Morpheus Rig - Josh Burton
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 1 month