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Danny Kneip:
Everything basically moves in slow motion, except the opening door! The poses of the characters, chiefly the yellow one, are extremely plain. Good idea, overall, but if you study the works of some others with this same idea, you'll really be able to spruce up the believability and drama in your animation. I do like the gray guy slowing putting his arm starting about F95 - which shows his confidence, and that he should not be questioned, but it's not clear whether or not that slow movement was on purpose or not. Keep trying!
Ryan D Lowe:
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Animator: Mariya Dudyshyn
Description: A man walked in on a Vampire drinking his friend's blood.
Experience: 2 3D Maya Animation elective classes in College
Time taken: A couple days.