Subir Santra:

voice not following lip sync at the end.

Vinu Nair:

whats happening in the scene..?

Noyan Özkan:

worst by far.

Sarah Johnson:

Actions are choppy and awkward. Work on staging and posing.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Sergio Barragan L:

terrible!