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Old man talking himself

by Jojo Pandit

Final Rating: 4.99. Finished 38 out of 151 entries.

507 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jojo Pandit

Description: A lonely old man trapped at ice desert area but he want to come out there. he see someone coming toward. than he talk to him self (psychological issue).

Experience: 5 yr

Time taken: 1 week 2 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Richard Clark:

It started off great but then your characters don't move much after you establish them.

Edward Chris Evjen:

The Ghost returns to the exact same pose he started in. Be sure to have a unique pose (That fits) for every idea.

Bruno de Coninck:

On the animation, nothing to say. But the acting is very stoic. There really not a lot of motion here and I think you could be more aventurous in your work.

Nathan Greensmith:

looks nice, I feel the characters acting and performances are minimal and a bit lost due to distance from the camera, but good effort.

Ramon Arango:

What is the old guy doing before the ghost shows up? I think if he were interrupted while walking (slow as he is) the whole situation would feel more believable. A character should always have a provable objective (Ed Hooks - Acting for Animators)