Comments:
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Richard Clark:
It started off great but then your characters don't move much after you establish them.
Edward Chris Evjen:
The Ghost returns to the exact same pose he started in. Be sure to have a unique pose (That fits) for every idea.
Bruno de Coninck:
On the animation, nothing to say. But the acting is very stoic. There really not a lot of motion here and I think you could be more aventurous in your work.
Nathan Greensmith:
looks nice, I feel the characters acting and performances are minimal and a bit lost due to distance from the camera, but good effort.
Ramon Arango:
What is the old guy doing before the ghost shows up? I think if he were interrupted while walking (slow as he is) the whole situation would feel more believable. A character should always have a provable objective (Ed Hooks - Acting for Animators)
Animator: Jojo Pandit
Description: A lonely old man trapped at ice desert area but he want to come out there. he see someone coming toward. than he talk to him self (psychological issue).
Experience: 5 yr
Time taken: 1 week 2 days