Comments:
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Richard Clark:
I recommend shooting reference next time
Ben Halstead:
Too much freezing in the movement... seems a bit robotic. Nice staging though.
Bruno de Coninck:
I don't know if you did used the pose to pose animation technic but if you did, your poses are not very strong. There is also a lack of moving hold and I suggest you to try to avoid linear mooves. Your character should create ark with their moves. It will looks a lot more natural.
Nathan Greensmith:
Really appreciate the bat signal reference. The animation is quite minimal, but good effort.
Moby:
Characters could have been framed better
movement a little stiff
Ramsey Parks:
The animation is good, but I feel that you could have zoomed in on the two characters when they were talking instead of keeping them all in frame.
Evgeniy Shumskiy:
i like the animation, but composition kinda broken. the fat and the thin guy should frame the girl and her only escape is the button.
Kyra Toomey:
Nice acting and subtlty (like when the second character taps his fingers together). Throwing in overshoots and settles would help the animation a lot.
Animator: Shannon Lau
Description: Two men encourage a woman to light the Wilford Signal.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 2 and a half weeks