Comments:
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Bruno de Coninck:
I think that there is a little gimball problem at the end wit the arm of the character on the right but I might be wrong. Over all, there is some floating parts between poses. I have the same problem in my work : the moving hold doesn't seems natural enought. My problem is probably caused by my references. Check it on your side!
Richard Clark:
I see you're going for a cartoony feel for the performance but you should still shoot reference for your piece. In order to exaggerate correctly it needs to come from a natural performance.
Eric Raffle:
acting doesn't suit the audio and your actions are too snappy.
Nathan Greensmith:
Great personality in the second character, I only usually judge it on the animation during the audio time, but I feel I should say fantastic phone spin and walk off at the end.
Moby:
Good start
Kyra Toomey:
Add an overshoot to him snapping up to a standing position. You're fluid animation falters at that moment.
Animator: Brendan Hanrahan
Description: A police officer gives some quick advice
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 3 weeks