Comments:
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Bruno de Coninck:
I see Malcolm! Malcolm everywhere! Lol! More seriously, it is not bad but I think that the reaction of the white shirt guy is a bit exagerated. I think that the black shirt blond guy could be more invasive. The lipsing is a bit too much. Basically, it looks like you tried to animate every single phonems. It is a fairly common mistake. Try to film yourself just saying those sentenses with a close up of your mouth and you'll you don't articulate everything. Personally, I use a miror on my desk to check how I pronounce every words before animate them.
Nikolas Diamant:
The audio seemed like 5-10 frames off
Ben Halstead:
Make sure to use reference before animating
Carlos Guadarrama:
Lol middle finger
Nathan Greensmith:
Great emotion, good poses, animation is a bit jumpy and abrupt. But good work,
Kyle Novak:
too much, too fast.
Animator: Rory McGrath
Description: Convince him to make the Call
Experience: Little, First Entry
Time taken: 10 days in spare time