Comments:
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Bruno de Coninck:
The jumpcut in the middle was kind of useless I think. Except that, your animation is pretty mecanic I think. Add some followthrought and some overlaps. Also, if you extand your arm, your center of gravity will shift and your whole body will move.
Nikolas Diamant:
you don't need the camera cut
Richard Clark:
I would shoot reference next time.
Eric Raffle:
your camera shots are not flowing nice you should have kept to one camera as the second camera did no justice it just made the shot worse.
Moby:
Floaty
Eddie Higgenbottom:
the black guy don't seem to be speaking up to the part.
keep on working!
Nathan Greensmith:
Great shot, some of the poses are good, but the animation is very jumpy, needs a bit of refining, as does the lip sync. Good effort though.
Kyra Toomey:
The camera cut wasn't necessary.
Animator: Paige Young
Description: These characters aren't mine; they were provided by my class instructor. No lighting, no texturing, just a quick playblast.
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 4 weeks