Nikolas Diamant:

Make the second guy's eyes move

Roy Matos:

Very strong acting in the first character, but the entrance of the second might've used a bit for polish in his follow-through. Really push those arcs!

Nathan Greensmith:

Some great poses, animation is ever so slightly not fluid enough, but overall great job.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Add overlap to your movements.

Shiladitto Gupto:

I'm sorry but you are not ready yet..

Moby:

Floaty

Bruno de Coninck:

Good start, but your facial animation seems a bit shy to me!

Nicolas Defosse:

Animation is a bit floaty, it needs a little bit of timing and rythm to me

Ramon Arango:

the staging for the moving of the phone is not clear. you barely see it moving towards the camera. a downward camera angle would help that, and as it looks like POV you could then glance back up again to see the rest of your animation.