Richard Clark:

Was there supposed to be lip sync? You must have run out of time.

Eric Raffle:

poor show, no speech and very simple animating.no effort

Nathan Greensmith:

Good story but a large lack of lip sync, good effort though. Some lip sync next time maybe?

Tyson Haeh:

no lip sync?

Bruno de Coninck:

I won't talk about the lack of lipsync because, sometime, enven without it, an animation can be awsome. But here, you miss some fundamentals. Don't be discouraged, it is a decent start in animation. But if you are serious in getting into animation, I strongly suggest you the Richard William's book Animator's Survival Guide. I think it could help you! Good luck!

Ben Halstead:

This would be a lot better with lip syncs. It's not clear who is speaking.

Kyra Toomey:

No lip sync, no acting.