Ben Halstead:

Great posing choices! Movement gets floaty in the second half

Nathan Greensmith:

Great poses, The bit where he slides closer rather than steps closer isn't great, but other than that its very good.

Zen Tan Xing Hao:

Screen-left character's hips can sway

Bruno de Coninck:

The beginning is fairly good, but when the second character appears, it seems that your moves start to be floaty and to slow. I suggest you to add some speed contrasts.

Samidha Kumar:

Idea is good.. Work on your holds and inbetweens... Also a reference video always helps :)

Moby:

Poses could have been improved a little.

Kyra Toomey:

The second character isn't completely off screen. And make sure to animate the legs too, even though you can't see them touching the ground the audience can still feal if a character is grounded or not.