Nikolas Diamant:

I really like the animation of the old man, good work!

Richard Clark:

Lip sync has too much change between phonemes at times...it tends to pop here and there.

Ben Halstead:

Great work! The very last pose seems too aggressive to match the dialogue, in my opinion.

Bruno de Coninck:

Your characters are really to rigid. They almost look like statues. I stongly suggest you to add some moving hold to them... Also your character in the middle of your composition is a bit awry. It looks like he would fall if he was not that rigid...

Nathan Greensmith:

Good movement and emotion from character two, character one is a little too rigid, but good work.

Kyra Toomey:

Love the character acting, and hitting the beats. The first guy though seams to be fore one, standing a touch too stiffly and for two a touch off balance. One nudge and he'll stumble.