Comments:
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Bruno de Coninck:
Good start. But the mouvement stop like if the characters hit a wall. Rework your ease-in and ease-out. Also some inbetween work could improve your animation!
Nathan Greensmith:
Great shot with some great key poses, lip sync seems a little off to me and I think it needs a little more anticipation before some movements, but over all good work.
Adam Momsen:
Feels a little floaty and too much pose-to-pose. Keep an eye on successive breaking of joints, not everything hitting on the same frame (you do some of this well, like in goggle-guy's fingers during 'wilfred the merciful').
I do like the 'subject-in-a-test-tube setup though, there's definitely a story here (especially since everyone looks the same... evil clones?)
ireshan:
second voice character's hand movement not with arc and easy in easy out also timing
Mag Magnet:
Great idea there with the bow! Fits the dialogue well.
Kyle Novak:
one of the better concepts.
Animator: Dustin Cinnamon
Description: Completed this for an animation class.
Experience: Minimal experience animating
Time taken: 10-15 hours