Nikolas Diamant:

I think it would look better if the lean was after "merciful" good work though

Eric Raffle:

your actions are going too much with the audio, try to give variation to your acting, you don't always have to put in a hand or body gesture when your character talks. Your lip-sync is not snapping enough and you needed clearer visuals on your speech

Richard Clark:

Should try and flesh this out more. The performances look very robotic.

Bruno de Coninck:

Good start, but I think you could add some breaking pose.

Nathan Greensmith:

great shot, some nice poses, good animation, good job.