Robert Zhou:

Good animation, great facial animation! I do think you made them squint too much though.

Bruno de Coninck:

Your character on the left is a bit over animated I think. For the black shirt one, the animation is good over all, but... He trying to look throught the scope with his forehead... It is a little bit weird...

Nikolas Diamant:

The gun and sword look too light, have the ends of them drag behind the character's hands

Eric Raffle:

not natural you needed to act out your scene a bit better

Frost Seven:

The only one with a gun!

Nathan Greensmith:

A great animation, I'm struggling with the narrative a little though, are they talking to each other? or another character / the camera? But other than that it is good.

ireshan:

Good one

Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

lip syncing could use more work

Paula Decanini:

Too much floaty motion. Add more holds.

Samidha Kumar:

nice idea... but work on the holds and timing. A video reference always helps :)